Film open rough

Elliott,Matt,Rob rough cut from cmdiploma on Vimeo.

This is the rough cut for my groups film opening. (Group 4)
Using the feedback we got in class i think people like the odd "artistic" shots dotted around our opening for example the lit cigarette with the defined line of smoke rising up from it. As shown here...

I think people didn't like how often we used the fish eye in our opening and this may be something we later change.
We still have yet to do our sound track to the opening but we have a few ideas floating around, Also we still need to input our titles.